Tranquil Sedation

What did you think when you told me, this was over?
Incessant quarrels to give us reasons forever…
Seasons of change seem to fool me! Hopeless desires.
Locked inside tranquil sedation. Gray and somber.

Give me, space to breathe.
Inside of me, make me free.
Love me, talk to me.
Make up some reasons, to be with me.

How many times have people said this to themselves?
Be beaten and also abandoned! Lonesome survivors.
Seeking the seamless treasons, that life leaves us.
Or blaming the loss and losers, for all their wises.

I will break free
Right now and be, the change to see.
Hear me, Fear me
Make up your mind n see through me.

Disclaimer: for those of you who wanna conclude that this post is about a 'guy-girl' relationship. It isn't! Think outside the box! :)


Murali Rajendran 8:09 PM  

just as i was about to put down my comments on this one, i'd noticed the disclaimer...its got me thinking now!
well its good to see that someone's finally come out of hibernation :)

Arun 1:48 AM  

ah, as murali says the disclaimer got me thinking...:) ..hey this one is pretty classy..brilliant title btw !

Nivedhitha 6:47 AM  

@ Murali:
one chut break from the hibernation! i was thinking of keeping the disclaimer on the top, later put it at the bottom!

so, did ya think outta the box? ;)

@ Arun R:
Welcome! :) am kinda in love with the title too! :D

Murali Rajendran 8:08 AM  

sniffed around for clues...looked at the tags, and the closest guess...

is it a relentless dream, or bottled up hope...that you speak of in these lines?!
may be the title suggests, a wishful desire long lost in sedation, and finally showing signs of life....

Girish (a.k.a) Gary 5:40 AM  

Powerful words.. And even am curious though at no point i concluded it was about guy girl relationship :)

My guesses:
1) The child in its mom's womb
2) Hope reasoning with self on why it should have been abandoned

I could be off by long but really thought provoking..

Shobhit Srivastava 8:55 AM  

Yin and Yang thoughts in a person's rationale?

"When words become unclear, I shall focus with photographs. When images become inadequate, I shall be content with silence" - Ansel Adams

In this space you will find images and words. It is upto you to weave 'em together and see what I see.